NaNoWriMo - Day 16 - A twist I didn't see coming

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Yes.

I had worked out who the murderer was going to be.

Don't you just hate it when the story unfolds in a different manner?  The current person tapped for the murder is looking very guilty, except for one piece of evidence that was not taken into account.

I can't say what it is.

And I can't tell you who the likely suspect is, because now I'm not quite sure myself.  I feel this is like a true life murder crime. plodding through the leads and clues one at a time.

Once again I'm writing a story that unfolds for me just as it would for the reader.

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