NaNoWriMo - Day 11 - Some characters deserve more

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I've decided to give a character that was meant to be only in the periphery, a larger role.

Characters seem to do that, demanding more from what was essentially a bit part.

But, not only in extending this part, the will be a little subplot that I didn't initially consider but now will seamlessly fit in, and add some more meaning to what eventually happens.

Another hole, it seems, is plugged.

Oddly enough it's a few idioms that were running around in my head that brought this on.



Take at face value

Never judge a book by its cover

A wolf in sheep's clothing

And, of course, in business to succeed you have to be ruthless.

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